Analysis of Break up thoughts



Days end as days begin
Alone and incomplete
Shattered dreams are pains wield
Despair is true defeat

Not seeing you the scorching loss
Is surging through my veins
Every song reminds me of how
I will never love again


Scheme XAXA XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 111101 010001 101111 011101 11010101 110111 100101111 1110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 207
Words 39
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on October 15, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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clifton redmond

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