Analysis of Being life partner; each other must understand



Being life partner; each other must understand

You say; you love her; she is your best friend
But you don't live together until your life ends
This is not right way; and it is a wrong trend
Being life partner; each other must understand

By parting with you are not living behind a name
You have children; think what will happen to them
Life is very meaningful; so alone don't leave them
Parent gone through the process; you one of them

You have seen the Globe full of women; and man
This is the beauty of that grand process in them
Kids get train in family; which they nowhere gain
There4 I call family Nursery of Universities; man

Annoying that most of us discarded the system man
Kids are roaming around; no family discipline in them.
They are going unruly; seeing that upset is my brain
When see them not train in family; get upset; feel pain

This valuable social system was developed in centuries
This disciplined system was adopted by us; being sane
In last few decades don't know why we discarded them.
We all have to join hands to bring back lost family fame


Scheme A bxbA cddd edfe edff xfdc
Poetic Form
Metre 10110110101 1111011111 111101001111 11111011011 10110110101 1101111100101 11101111011 1110100101111 1011011111 11101111001 11010111101 11101001111 111100100101001 01011110100101 111001110010001 111001010101111 11111010010111 1100101010100100 110010101011101 0110111110101 11111111111001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,045
Words 196
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on September 27, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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