Analysis of Bathroom Floor



Atop you they lay
these hands, these limbs, these feet
a sluggish meat
is wasting away
your chill, your stiffness sleeps

Against you they stay
this neck, this back, these cheeks
eyes that speak
with nothing to say
and no known beat to keep


Scheme ABBAX AXXAX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 01111 111111 0101 11001 111101 01111 111111 111 11011 011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 230
Words 44
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 5
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on May 10, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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