Analysis of After the Setting Sun



After the Setting Sun
She is going to leave me in the evening
after the setting sun
when the world turns once over
in front of everyone

My heart will fall under
the moon's lasting gaze
where I stare forever
for the end of this day

She is waiting for the train
that I hope never comes
for my spirit has faltered
and I am unable to run

Beneath heaven's stars
she is leaving without a farewell kiss
as my love for her
will be forever missed


Scheme AxAba bxbx xxxa xxbx
Poetic Form
Metre 100101 11101110010 100101 1011110 01110 111110 01101 111010 101111 1110101 111101 1110110 01101011 01101 111001011 11110 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 421
Words 87
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on July 05, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Norman Wilson

IntroductionForgotten are the times the tick of a clock once chimed sobering sounds that caressed my hearts nightly dreams. As I awaken to the touch of light that burns upon a candles wick flickering my words for all to see. This drives my thoughts through the darkest of nights of loneliness that renders my quill upon parchment with ink that dances to minds and souls.Now I hear the screeching of my heart when the blue horizon covers the orb of emptiness.Within the shelter of my mind with little, purpose other than my words that keep me sane. These are my new poems I have written in the quiet of my night, forever wished away in a writer’s pain. As I strive to write that perfect poem that, my soul desperately seeks. Then and only then can my words rest upon a sleep. more…

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