Analysis of Absent of Dreams



Absent of Dreams

My heart
now bleeds
for what I do not know
and what I cannot dream

For my thoughts
bear no fruit
within the night
for what I see in the day's sun

Amid the raindrops
from the Sycamore Tree
that gently fall in a breeze
from foliage of green

Where
the flowers rise in spring
amongst the songs of a nightingale
from the tree of sheen in heaven's ray

Now lost is the whispers
of rustling leaves
once touched by open air
absent of my dreams


Scheme A XXXX XXXX XXXX BXXX XXBA
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 11 11 111111 011101 111 111 0101 11110011 0101 10101 1101001 11011 1 010101 010110100 101110101 111010 1101 111101 10111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 431
Words 89
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on July 05, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Norman Wilson

IntroductionForgotten are the times the tick of a clock once chimed sobering sounds that caressed my hearts nightly dreams. As I awaken to the touch of light that burns upon a candles wick flickering my words for all to see. This drives my thoughts through the darkest of nights of loneliness that renders my quill upon parchment with ink that dances to minds and souls.Now I hear the screeching of my heart when the blue horizon covers the orb of emptiness.Within the shelter of my mind with little, purpose other than my words that keep me sane. These are my new poems I have written in the quiet of my night, forever wished away in a writer’s pain. As I strive to write that perfect poem that, my soul desperately seeks. Then and only then can my words rest upon a sleep. more…

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