Analysis of abandoned

All i can see is broken faces among the masses
As all i feel is empty spaces
Where memories of love should have been stored
Where abandoned science may hold no truth or value
Or walk along the path and know you lost it all  for foolish pride
No forgiveness as none shall be given
How, how can you walk away from family
How does your heart beat with such ice inside your soul

Poetic Form
Metre 11111101001010 111111010 1100111111 1010101111110 1101010111111101 1010111110 11111011100 111111110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 367
Words 74
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 299
Words per stanza (avg) 75
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Submitted on October 15, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

22 sec read

clifton redmond

I am tiring of the hardship of this site i will be posting less here if you wish me to review your poems here or just share your work with me you can do so by looking me up on facebook, i hope this site is fixed soon as i have learned so much here and have made so many countless friends here, most of you i already see on facebook, but the ones who i have not found i urge you to find me more…

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