Analysis of A Suicidal Moment
A Suicidal Moment
Rest of my days are numbered, I don't find it funny
My mom threw me out in a summer, she don't even want me
All these no good friends but they only want something from me
I feel like half a man cuz my girl give me money
Pimples poppin like corn
Bones skinny as the sticks
I wonder what life would be like if I was never born
Probably wouldn't have to deal with none of this
Should I die with a gun to my head or a knife to the throat
I just might get kicked out the church for the things I just wrote
I can hear my grandma sayin sinking this low is better than me
I feel like I'm starring in a game show because my life is in jeopardy
Staying on this earth is such a terrible sensation
So I alienated myself from the lord and tore up his invitation
My new destination is with Lucifer, so horrible and grimy
I want to bury myself in Hell where no one can find me
Death is what I want to grab
A toe tag is what I want to have
I want to drown myself in my pain so I’m preparing a blood bath
Tired of people handing me too much crap
Oh I just thought of a good suicide plan I'll be right back....
P.S.
This is for the all people that said They couldn't stand me
Goodbye to all my fake friends
And phony family
(A child in West Philadelphia hung himself last night in his home
And his name was...)
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 001010 1111110111110 111110010111011 11111111011011 1111011111110 10111 110101 11011111111101 100101111111 111101111101101 11111101101111 1111101101111011 1111100011011110100 10111110100010 11100011010111010 11010111001100010 11110101111111 1111111 011111111 1111101111010011 10110101111 11111011011111 1 11101101111011 111111 010100 0101010010111011 0111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,286 |
Words | 273 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 21, 4, 2 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 255 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 68 |
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Submitted on February 24, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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