Analysis of A Rainbow's Lament



There is a method to my madness
and my technicolor soul.
Live beside me and you'll notice
I am the one who makes you whole.

I'll fill you up with sunshine
in yellow rays to make you ache
with a hunger for more of me.
Just how much can you take?

I'll be your blue sky baby
and the grass beneath your feet.
a vivid overdose of color
for you to breathe and sleep and eat.

Pots of gold need rainbows;
my spectrum fits you like a glove;
say goodbye to gray days, darling:
I'm your favorite shade of love.


Scheme ABAB XCDC DEXE XFXF
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110101110 011001 10110110 11011111 111111 01011111 10101111 111111 1111110 0010111 01010110 11110101 11111 11011101 1111110 11100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 484
Words 100
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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