Analysis of A Lovely Future



Far away off in the future
In a cloud that is all but gay
The shining blue of young love’s tears
Will give a tiny kiss to gray.

Gray meaning love that is stable.
Gray meaning love that is true.
Balancing out the dynamic
And perfectly completing blue.

The colors will mesh and tangle
As they start to fall long and hard
Landing in grass so blithe and green
That the rest of the world looks marred.

Rainbows will be superfluous,
And lovebirds will sing songs for naught
The world’s largest ocean of love
Is harbored in one tiny drop.


Scheme XAXA BCXC BDXD XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 10110010 00111111 01011111 11010111 11011110 1101111 10010010 01000101 01011010 11111101 10011101 10110111 11110 0111111 01101011 11001101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 520
Words 100
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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