Analysis of A little Humour



Hot Pants
She looked to me
as the doll she was
bound in tight leather
that set the town a buzz.

Her boots
laced above her knees
While her pants
were skin tight to please.

Her blouse hung
without a bra
As she made sure
everyone saw.

She liked to go
to the seniors dance
Where
she would show off her new hot pants.

Her platinum hair
was beaded in the colour red
Now my poor old grandmother
of eighty is dead.


Scheme AXXBX XCAC XXXX XXDA DEBE
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1111 10111 10110 110101 01 10101 101 01111 011 0101 1111 101 1111 10101 1 11110111 0101 1100011 111110 11011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 386
Words 82
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on July 05, 2016

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Norman Wilson

IntroductionForgotten are the times the tick of a clock once chimed sobering sounds that caressed my hearts nightly dreams. As I awaken to the touch of light that burns upon a candles wick flickering my words for all to see. This drives my thoughts through the darkest of nights of loneliness that renders my quill upon parchment with ink that dances to minds and souls.Now I hear the screeching of my heart when the blue horizon covers the orb of emptiness.Within the shelter of my mind with little, purpose other than my words that keep me sane. These are my new poems I have written in the quiet of my night, forever wished away in a writer’s pain. As I strive to write that perfect poem that, my soul desperately seeks. Then and only then can my words rest upon a sleep. more…

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