Analysis of Tú amante de siempre



En mis uñas hay rastros de tu piel
En tu piel hay huellas de mis uñas
En mi boca sabor a leche y miel,
Miel que entre tus manos empuñas.

Mis dientes mordieron tu carne
tu carne de sabor afrodisíaco
Afrodisíacos, son tus besos
Besos que me das como un maníaco.

Sin ser bailarines hicimos una danza
Danza de pasión y de locura,
Locura que el límite no alcanza
Alcanza para calmar tanta cordura.

Por mis caderas resbala el sudor
Sudor de nuestros cuerpos entrelazados
Entrelazados sin ningún pudor,
Pudor de estar enamorados.

Me miras con tus ojos penetrantes
Penetrantes como mi deseo
Mi deseo de ser siempre tu amante,
Tú amante de siempre, sin rodeos.


Scheme ABAB XCBC XDBD DBDB BBXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111111111 111111111 111010111 111011011 11111 111111 11111 111110111 11111010 10111111 1111111 1101011 111111 11111 11111 1111 111111 11011 111111010 101011110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 642
Words 116
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Carmen Victoria Jiménez

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