Analysis of 'Bobbie' for Brotherhood

Clarence Michael James Stanislaus Dennis 1876 (Auburn) – 1938 (Melbourne)



Lang syne I penned a mickle rhyme
 That muckle grief brocht to my soul;
For critics said 'twas aye a crime
 Nae Scottish patriot could thole
Whit way I ca'ed their honored bard,
  Wi' kind intention, 'Bobbie' Burns.
Aye, mon, they smote me fine an' hard
  Wi' sic' fierce words as nae yin learns
Save native sons, those braw, stern men
O' mountain crag an' heather glen.

Misdoubtin' whit my critics said,
  An' sair distressed aboot my plight,
A notion cam' intil my head
  To haud a Scottish plebiscite.
Forbye I passed frae Scot to Scot
  Spierin' whit way they named their bard,
An' aye the same reply I got
  Wi'out dispute in sic' regard;
For ilka mon gie'd answer straight
Wi' ne'er a thocht tae heesitate.

A mon frae Glasea first I speired,
  A humble an' unlettered loon,
An' then a scholar, red o' beard,
  That cam' from Edinburgh toon;
A Hielan' chief, a rowan' chiel,
  Men oot o' Leith an' Aberdeen,
Tae ane an' a' I made appeal,
  Tae gowk an' greybeard, wife an' wean,
An' a', wi' unanimity
The selfsame answer gi'ed tae me.

An 'twas na' Robert, Rab or Rob
  They ca'ed yon braw, poetic yin
That wakes in Scottish hearts a throb
  Wi' words that mak' the whole world kin.
They named him 'Bobbie' wi'out shame,
  As Bobbie he will ever be
To sic' as scorn to clothe his name
  Wi' smug respectabeelity.
To humble hearts his songs defend
Beloved Bobbie, brither, friend.


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Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11110101 11011111 11011101 11010011 111111101 11010101 11111111 11111111 11011111 11011101 111101 1101111 0101111 1101010 1111111 1111111 11010111 1010101 11011101 110111 0111111 010111 11010111 11110001 0110101 1111110 11101101 1111111 1010100 0110111 11110111 111110101 11010101 11110111 1111011 11011101 11111111 111 11011101 011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,352
Words 250
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 10, 10
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 256
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Clarence Michael James Stanislaus Dennis

Clarence Michael James Stanislaus Dennis, better known as C. J. Dennis, was an Australian poet known for his humorous poems, especially "The Songs of a Sentimental Bloke", published in the early 20th century. Though Dennis's work is less well known today, his 1915 publication of The Sentimental Bloke sold 65,000 copies in its first year, and by 1917 he was the most prosperous poet in Australian history. Together with Banjo Paterson and Henry Lawson, both of whom he had collaborated with, he is often considered among Australia's three most famous poets. While attributed to Lawson by 1911, Dennis later claimed he himself was the 'laureate of the larrikin'. When he died at the age of 61, the Prime Minister of Australia Joseph Lyons suggested he was destined to be remembered as the 'Australian Robert Burns'. more…

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