Analysis of In your silence I find my voice
In the quietude of your presence
at first came unease;
that familiar itch of discomfort
enveloped me.
As I would peer in your eyes
searching for what to say
sleuthing for clues you'd never give away
I realize:
Words pleasing to your ears
are merely
a false sense of security
in seeing me get through my years.
So like a mold casts its void,
you knew in your silence I would find my own voice.
"Why?" I whispered at five
when we came across the fated bird on the street
"Why?" I ask again, in quarantine.
"Without death, there is no life"
I hear when I listen
Now I settle into the familiar itchiness
of finding my own wisdom
In time, your silence will make me, me.
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My dad was a man of few words. He passed away from COVID-19 in December 2020. I recall my first memorable confrontation with death occurred when my dad and I were walking outside of the hair salon my grandmother owned and my mom worked at. There was this dead bird, possibly a sparrow, outside the shop where the parking lot met the sidewalk. And I talked to my dad about death at that time. In many ways, my dad's proclivity for silence in his parenting style, and the topic of death have a unifying theme of dealing with discomfort, that in a backward way, I found brought me comfort in my grief.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0011110 11101 101011010 0101 1111011 101111 1011110101 110 110111 110 01110100 01011111 1101111 110110111111 111011 111010101101 11101010 0111111 111110 11100100101 1101110 011101111 1 1110111111011100101111100001011011110101011101011101011111111110001011011010110101111101111101011101001100110010010111010011101010100101111110011 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 1,285 |
Words | 245 |
Sentences | 13 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 8, 2, 4, 4, 2 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 42 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 169 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 40 |
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