Analysis of Midnight Pleasure”

charliewang 1950 (Montgomery)

In the darkness of the night,
here you come like a dream,
Silence is turning into soothing sounds,
of your fearless desires...

I don't want to awake from what must be a dream,
for how could I be so deserving, what have I done?
I will lie here and receive these vibes as long as they come.
Surely one of the Gods has made a mistake in knowing me.

Lies sweet lies...
Irresistible and suitable for lonely souls,
Let’s dream together, with a body and mind,
Let’s escape to Paradise...

Of this dream, I pray to never awake
I am lost in your eyes, in your essence
Is this what's meant by feeling the truth?
Even if it's a lie, it's a secret meant only for us.

Scheme XAXX AXXX XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0010101 111101 1011001101 1110010 111101111101 1111110101111 11110011111111 101101110010101 111 010001001101 11010101001 101110 1111111001 1110110110 111111001 101101101011011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 642
Words 127
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted by charliewang on January 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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charliewang

Born the 3rd child, in the 3rd month, one of 10 siblings, we find Charles W. Felder Sr. Fast forwarding, finds our once dubbed 'Master Poet Charliewang', a noteworthy Poet, storyteller, and Singer (in that order). He was a high school dropout, acquiring his General Education Degree while serving in the Marines. While in the Marines, one of his proudest services was being part of the Marine Corps Silent Drill Team at Marine Barracks 8th & I, Washington As an entrepreneur, he finds his time challenged from the demands of business and trying to find time for personal desires toward the arts and the desire to be an entertainer. A DIY effort had seen “Season Of Poetry” as his debut CD to fruition in 2005. He traveled on the collegiate circuit presenting his “What Is Love” tour from 2004-07. Other accomplishments include but not limited to, receiving a Business Degree, and working with troubled youth as a Drill Instructor for the Great State of Alabama... more…

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