Analysis of A Grumpy Poem



By: Curtis Carroll, 03/04/2020

Stay at home, don’t get out of bed,
If you go outside, you are dead, dead, dead!
Nothing but re-runs on TV; the cards you can’t find,
Wife and kids screaming at each other; you are losing your mind!
The line-up for groceries can take all day,
The liquor shops and bars are closed; you can’t even go to Church and pray!
Children at home because the Schools have closed its doors,
The mess they tend to leave – Moms keep mopping the floors.
If the Curfew isn’t lifted soon, you will see;
A rise in home assaults – much higher than it used to be.
Mother Nature, what have you done?
As if Dorian wasn’t enough, you have added an unknown.
Take this scourge away, and leave us alone;
Then we can be a happy people again, in our home sweet home!

Note: Nothing better to do.


Scheme X AABBCCDDEEXFFX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 11111111 1111111111 1011111101111 101101110111011 01111001111 01010111111011101 101101011111 011111111001 10101101111 01010111011111 10101111 111001011110101 1110101101 11110101001010111 1101011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 796
Words 152
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 14, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 202
Words per stanza (avg) 51
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Submitted on January 09, 2021

Modified on April 20, 2023

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