Analysis of After coming back

After coming back
Hassan Hegazy Hassan

The past visited me
in the tender voice of love.
I crossed hundreds of years
to tomorrow.
I abandoned the dream
and forgot the thirsty wound
for the blood of the heart.
So I sank into the sea of love.
The waves lifted me up
to your eyes , to the beach.
I intended to cross the seven seas
to bring you the mystery of
the beautiful roses,
to bring the mother pearl for you
to decorate the most beautiful neck,
Your neck !
To guard the most valuable fruits
if the night falls or the beach betrays.

I intended to come back
carrying the seven Moons
that are cultivated with roses,
to bring for you Joseph's fat cows
to graze in the wheat fields on the beach.
But I am sorry my love,
My life is too short to achieve the dream.
So, I'll plant my age a tree,
producing the sweetest flower ,
Taking care of the brightest chest,
your chest!
Hedged by the years of my life,
bearing the best fruit in the garden
of honesty.
Sorry, my love,
the gain from my first journey is honesty,
Is it enough for your dowry?!

Poetic Form
Metre 10101 1 01101 10 011001 0010111 111011 101 101001 0010101 101101 111010111 011011 111101 1010110101 11101001 010010 11010111 110011001 11 11011001 101110101 1010111 1000101 11100110 11111011 110011101 1111011 1111110101 1111101 01001010 10110101 11 1101111 100110010 1100 1011 01111101100 11011110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,022
Words 202
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 18, 17
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 272
Words per stanza (avg) 68

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Hassan Hegazy Hassan

Hassan Hegazy Hassan, an Egyptian poet and translator. Born in 1960, Graduated from Zagazig University, 1982, got his BA in English language. Member of Egypt's Writer Union and member in the Egyptian Translators and Linguists' Association ,Cairo. In poetry: Waiting for Dawn (2007). / Eve ….and me! (2007). / Warm Whispers ( 2008). In my heart ...Egypt ) 2009). January 25th.. A new birth (2011) . Spring on the banks of the Nile. (2012). / Messages of nostalgia ( 2013). Papers from the book of poetry 2019 AD In translation:- 1- Whoop of Scent, a poetry collection for: Asmae’ Saqr Al- Qassimi. U.A .E. Emirate. Into English. ( 2009 ) 2- Seven ages for Man, selected poems from English poetry to Arabic language. (2011) 3- Under warm Sun: Short stories, for the Tunisian Writer: Ibraheem Draghouthy. Into English. (2013) 4- Bleeding under sand: Very Short Stories. Hassan Ali Al- Battran. Saudi Arabia. Into English. (2013) 5- Songs along the River Nile. Selected poems about The Nile for poets from different countries about the Nile .. Into Arabic. (2014) 6- Whispers from the other side of the world: A poetry collection for 15 Arab poets from different parts of the Arab world, into English. (2014) 7- Bee- Flu: Al-kessah Al-sha'erah. Mohamed Elshahat Mohamed. Egypt. Into English. (2014) 8-The Conquerors. very Short Stories by: Mohammed Ibn Rabea al-Ghamedy, Saudi Arabia. Into English. (2014) 9- Paradise in my chest, Tahani Al- Douihm, very short stories, Saudi Arabia. Into English. (2017) 10- The Signal is still red, very short stories, Ibtessam Al-Bakhmy, Saudi Arabia, into English. (2017) 11– Innovations from the east and the west. A poetry collection. Asmae’ Saqr Al- Qassimi. U.A .E. Emirate. Into English. (2017) 12- A Gold Box. Story for adolescents. Waheeb Nadeem Wahbah Translated into English. 2018. Palestine. 13- A storm on the East. Novel, 2018, Nabil Al-Muhaish .Saudi Arabia. 14- Egyptian Epics (championships of Pharaohs'Descendants) ,By: Selim Mounir ,Into English 2019 . 15- My greeting for you is rain. Poetry. Amal Awad Radwan . Into English .Palestine .2019. 16- I have found him .. But. A novel. Hasseb Bustan Al-Khamessy Iraq . 2019 . 17-A Glowing almond Smile. Poetry . Aamaal Awwaad Radwaan . Into English .Palestine .2019. 18-My Romantic Tweets . Poetry. Aljawhrah Aud Alqwady . Into English. Kuwait 2019 . 19- The mirrors of words. poetry . Pauls Ashuree .Iraq . Into English. 2019. 20-When the stone speaks. Pauls Ashuree .Iraq. poetry. Into English .2019. 21- Death and Birth .Poetry . Ibrahim Yalda Ibrahim. Iraq . Into English. 2019. 22- The keys of the Heavens . Waheeb Nadeem Wahbah. Palestine . Poetry. Into English. 2020 . E-mail: more…

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