Analysis of After coming back
After coming back
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Hassan Hegazy Hassan
Egypt
The past visited me
in the tender voice of love.
I crossed hundreds of years
to tomorrow.
I abandoned the dream
and forgot the thirsty wound
for the blood of the heart.
So I sank into the sea of love.
The waves lifted me up
to your eyes , to the beach.
I intended to cross the seven seas
to bring you the mystery of
the beautiful roses,
to bring the mother pearl for you
to decorate the most beautiful neck,
Your neck !
To guard the most valuable fruits
if the night falls or the beach betrays.
I intended to come back
carrying the seven Moons
that are cultivated with roses,
to bring for you Joseph's fat cows
to graze in the wheat fields on the beach.
But I am sorry my love,
My life is too short to achieve the dream.
So, I'll plant my age a tree,
producing the sweetest flower ,
Taking care of the brightest chest,
your chest!
Hedged by the years of my life,
bearing the best fruit in the garden
of honesty.
Sorry, my love,
the gain from my first journey is honesty,
Is it enough for your dowry?!
Scheme | A XX BCXXDXXCXEXCFXGGXX AXFXECDBXHHXXBCBB |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10101 1 01101 10 011001 0010111 111011 101 101001 0010101 101101 111010111 011011 111101 1010110101 11101001 010010 11010111 110011001 11 11011001 101110101 1010111 1000101 11100110 11111011 110011101 1111011 1111110101 1111101 01001010 10110101 11 1101111 100110010 1100 1011 01111101100 11011110 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,022 |
Words | 202 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 18, 17 |
Lines Amount | 39 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 272 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 68 |
About this poem
It is about love .
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