Analysis of Shooting stars

Christopher David Mears 1982 (Indianapolis)



may last forever,

that they do,

fade away soon.

Unlike you and I, 
                            
that shall always be together;

sharing this hemisphere,

under the same moon.

I gaze upwards,
illuminated under,
this zenith's brightest stars,
I think of you and I;
and my heart swoons.

With you,
I am beyond wealthy;
assests totaling,
much, much more,
than your average tycoon.

With your hand,
held within mine,
my hope floats higher,
then the largest hot-air balloons.

Your love,
is out of this world baby;
certifiable,
crazy.
           

This admiration is not merely   
unique or special,
researchers could only,
caterorigize it as celestial.

My love for you is alien,
so obviously,
out of this world.
You know,
like ET?
Extra-Terrestrial.

My love for you is huge.
Gigantic: you know it's massive.
As you orbit around my mind,
I can only sit passive;
thinking,
that taking a rocket,          
towards this apex
would just be useless,
and cheating.
Becuase,
as you take me there,
already,
the space,
inbetween I and thecosmos,
is ever-fleeting.

I know what happens,
when stars collide.
Everything changes,
and you just can't hide.
It is now,
within the same constellation
we reside.

may last forever,

that they do,

fade away soon.

Unlike you and I        
                     
that shall always be together;

sharing this hemisphere,

under the same moon.


Scheme A B C D A E C faxdf bghxc xxax xgig gigi jgxxxi xkxkhxxxhfxgxfh xlxlxjl A B C D A E C
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 111 1011 01101 1 1111010 10110 10011 1110 010010 110101 111101 0111 11 110110 1100 111 1110001 111 1011 11110 10101101 11 1111110 1 10 1 10101110 01110 100110 111010 11111100 11000 1111 11 11 100100 111111 01011110 11100111 1110110 10 110010 0111 11110 010 1 11111 010 01 1101 11010 11110 1101 1010 01111 111 0101010 101 11010 111 1011 01101 1 1111010 10110 10011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,461
Words 232
Sentences 19
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 3, 1, 1, 5, 5, 4, 5, 4, 6, 15, 7, 1, 1, 1, 3, 1, 1
Lines Amount 67
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted on September 16, 2020

Modified on March 14, 2023

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