Analysis of Jock, To The First Army



O Rab an' Dave an' rantin' Jim,
The geans were turnin' reid
When Scotland saw yer line grow dim,
Wi' the pipers at its heid;
Noo, i' yon warld we dinna ken,
Like strangers ye maun gang -
"We've sic a waleo' Angus men
That we canna weary lang."

An' little Wat - my brither Wat -
Man, are ye aye the same?
Or is yon sma' white hoose forgot
Doon by the strath at hame?
An' div' ye mind foo aft we trod
The Isla's banks before? -
- "My place is wi' the Hosts o' God,
But I mind me o' Strathmore."

It's daith comes skirling through the sky,
Below there's naucht but pain,
We canna see whaur deid men lie
For the drivin' o' the rain;
Ye a' hae passed frae fear an' doot.
Ye're far frae airthly ill -
- "We're near, we're here, my wee recruit,
An' we fecht for Scotland still."


Scheme ABAXCDCD XXXAEFEF GHGHBIXI
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 01011 11011111 1010111 1111111 110111 1101101 111101 1101111 111101 11111101 110111 11111111 01101 11110111 111111 1111101 011111 1111111 101101 10111111 111111 11111101 1111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 753
Words 162
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 185
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Violet Jacob

Violet Jacob (1 September 1863 – 9 September 1946) was a Scottish writer, now known especially for her historical novel Flemington and for her poetry, mainly in Scots. more…

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