Analysis of A Ramshackle Room

R C Lehmann 1856 ( Ecclesall, Sheffield, ) – 1929 ( High Wycombe, )



When the gusts are at play with the trees on the lawn,
And the lights are put out in the vault of the night;
When within all is snug, for the curtains are drawn,
And the fire is aglow and the lamps are alight,
Sometimes, as I muse, from the place where I am
My thoughts fly away to a room near the Cam.

'Tis a ramshackle room, where a man might complain
Of a slope in the ceiling, a rise in the floor;
With a view on a court and a glimpse on a lane,
And no end of cool wind through the chinks of the door;
With a deep-seated chair that I love to recall,
And some groups of young oarsmen in shorts on the wall.

There's a fat jolly jar of tobacco, some pipes -
A meerschaum, a briar, a cherry, a clay -
There's a three-handled cup fit for Audit or Swipes
When the breakfast is done and the plates cleared away.
There's a litter of papers, of books a scratch lot,
Such as Plato, and Dickens, and Liddell and Scott.

And a crone in a bonnet that's more like a rag
From a mist of remembrance steps suddenly out;
And her funny old tongue never ceases to wag
As she tidies the room where she bustles about;
For a man may be strong and a man may be young,
But he can't put a drag on a Bedmaker's tongue.

And, oh, there's a youngster who sits at his ease
In the hope, which is vain, that the tongue may run down,
With his feet on the grate and a book on his knees,
And his cheeks they are smooth and his hair it is brown.
Then I sigh myself back to the place where I am
From that ramshackle room near the banks of the Cam.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 101111101101 001111001101 101111101011 0010101001101 01111101111 11101101101 10101101101 101001001001 101101001101 011111101101 10110111111 01111101101 10110110111 0101001001 101101111011 101011001101 101011011011 111001001001 001001011101 101101011001 001011101011 1110111101 101111001111 1111011011 01101011111 001111101111 111101001111 011111011111 11111101111 11101101101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,495
Words 315
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 231
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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R C Lehmann

Rudolph Chambers "R. C." Lehmann (3 January 1856 – 22 January 1929) was an English writer and Liberal Party politician who sat in the House of Commons from 1906 to 1910. As a writer he was best known for three decades in which he was a major contributor to Punch as well as founding editor of Granta magazine.  more…

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