Analysis of An Ode To Spring In The Metropolis



(AFTER R. LE G.)

Is this the Seine?
And am I altogether wrong
About the brain,
Dreaming I hear the British tongue?
Dear Heaven! what a rhyme!
And yet 'tis all as good
As some that I have fashioned in my time,
Like bud and wood;
And on the other hand you couldn't have a more precise or neater
Metre.

Is this, I ask, the Seine?
And yonder sylvan lane,
Is it the Bois?
Ma foi!
Comme elle est chic, my Paris, my grisette!
Yet may I not forget
That London still remains the missus
Of this Narcissus.

No, no! 'tis not the Seine!
It is the artificial mere
That permeates St. James's Park.
The air is bosom-shaped and clear;
And, Himmel! do I hear the lark,
The good old Shelley-Wordsworth lark?
Even now, I prithee,
Hark
Him hammer
On Heaven's harmonious stithy,
Dew-drunken, like my grammar!

And O the trees!
Beneath their shade the hairless coot
Waddles at ease,
Hushing the magic of his gurgling beak;
Or haply in Tree-worship leans his cheek
Against their blind
And hoary rind,
Observing how the sap
Comes humming upwards from the tap-
Root!
Thrice happy, hairless coot!

And O the sun!
See, see, he shakes
His big red hands at me in wanton fun!
A glorious image that! it might be Blake's;
As in my critical capacity I took occasion to remark elsewhere,
When heaping praise
On this exceptionally happy phrase,
Although I made it up myself.
But I and Blake, we really constitute a pair,
Each being rather like an artless woodland elf.

And O the stars! I cannot say
I see a star just now,
Not at this time of day;
But anyhow
The stars are all my brothers;
(This verse is shorter than the others).

O Constitution Hill!
(This verse is shorter still).

Ah! London, London in the Spring!
You are, you know you are,
So full of curious sights,
Especially by nights.
From gilded bar to gilded bar
Youth goes his giddy whirl,
His heart fulfilled of Music-Hall,
His arm fulfilled of girl!
I frankly call
That last effect a perfect pearl!

I know it's
Not given to many poets
To frame so fair a thing
As this of mine, of Spring.
Indeed, the world grows Lilliput
All but
A precious few, the heirs of utter godlihead,
Who wear the yellow flower of blameless bodlihead!

And they, with Laureates dead, look down
On smaller fry unworthy of the crown,
Mere mushroom men, puff-balls that advertise
And bravely think to brush the skies.
Great is advertisement with little men!
Moi, qui vous parle, L- G-ll, nn-,
Have told them so;
I ought to know!


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Metre 10101 11010 0110101 0101 10110101 110101 011111 1111110011 1101 01010111010101110 10 1111010 010101 1101 11 1101111011 111101 110101010 11010 1111010 1100101 1101101 01110101 01011101 01110101 10111 1 110 11001001 1101110 0101 01110101 111 1010111001 110110111 0111 0101 010101 11010101 1 110101 0101 1111 1111110101 01001011111 1011000100110101011 1101 1101000101 111111 11011101001 1101011111 01011101 110111 111111 110 0111110 111101010 10101 111101 11010001 111111 1111001 01011 11011101 111101 11011101 110111 1101 11010011 111 11011010 111101 111111 010111 11 0101011101 11010101101 011100111 1101010101 110111110 01011101 1101001101 11111111 1111 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,368
Words 456
Sentences 41
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 10, 8, 11, 11, 10, 6, 2, 10, 8, 8
Lines Amount 85
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 170
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Owen Seaman

Sir Owen Seaman, 1st Baronet was a British writer, journalist and poet. He is best known as editor of Punch, from 1906 to 1932. more…

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