Analysis of Hialmar Speaks To The Raven



from Leconte de Lisle

Night on the bloodstained snow: the wind is chill:
And there a thousand tombless warriors lie,
Grasping their swords, wild-featured. All are still.
Above them the black ravens wheel and cry.

A brilliant moon sends her cold light abroad:
Hialmar arises from the reddened slain,
Heavily leaning on his broken sword,
And bleeding from his side the battle-rain.

"Hail to you all: is there one breath still drawn
Among those fierce and fearless lads who played
So merrily, and sang as sweet in the dawn
As thrushes singing in the bramble shade?

"They have no word to say: my helm's unbound,
My breastplate by the axe unriveted:
Blood's on my eyes; I hear a spreading sound,
Like waves or wolves that clamour in my head.

"Eater of men, old raven, come this way,
And with thine iron bill open my breast:
To-morrow find us where we lie to-day,
And bear my heart to her that I love best.

"Through Upsala, where drink the Jarls and sing,
And clash their golden bowls in company,
Bird of the moor, carry on tireless wing
To Ylmer's daughter there the heart of me.

"And thou shalt see her standing straight and pale,
High pedestalled on some rook-haunted tower:
She has two earrings, silver and vermeil,
And eyes like stars that shine in sunset hour.

"Tell her my love, thou dark bird ominous;
Give her my heart, no bloodless heart and vile
But red compact and strong, O raven. Thus
Shall Ylmer's daughter greet thee with a smile.

"Now let my life from twenty deep wounds flow,
And wolves may drink the blood. My time is done.
Young, brave and spotless, I rejoice to go
And sit where all the Gods are, in the sun."


Scheme A BCBC DEXE FGFG HDHX IJIJ KLKL XMAM NONO PQPQ
Poetic Form
Metre 1010110 110110111 0101011001 1011110111 0110110101 0101101101 10101011 1001011101 0101110101 1111111111 0111010111 11000111001 1101000101 1111111101 111011 1111110101 111111011 1011110111 0111011011 1101111111 0111101111 11110101 0111010100 11011011001 111010111 0111010101 111111010 111101001 0111110110 1011111100 1011110101 1110011101 111011101 1111110111 0111011111 1101010111 0111011001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,618
Words 305
Sentences 15
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 29
Font size:
 

Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on April 07, 2023

1:32 min read
16

James Elroy Flecker

James Elroy Flecker was an English poet, novelist and playwright. As a poet he was most influenced by the Parnassian poets. more…

All James Elroy Flecker poems | James Elroy Flecker Books

0 fans

Discuss this James Elroy Flecker poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Hialmar Speaks To The Raven" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 25 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/55676/hialmar-speaks-to-the-raven>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    5
    days
    4
    hours
    34
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The way the lines look on the page is known as ________.
    A Line
    B Form
    C Paragraph
    D Stanza