Analysis of Chiarascuro: Rose

Conrad Potter Aiken 1889 (Savannah, Georgia) – 1973 (Savannah, Georgia)



He
Fill your bowl with roses: the bowl, too, have of crystal.
Sit at the western window. Take the sun
Between your hands like a ball of flaming crystal,
Poise it to let it fall, but hold it still,
And meditate on the beauty of your existence;
The beauty of this, that you exist at all.

She
The sun goes down, but without lamentation.
I close my eyes, and the stream of my sensation
In this, at least, grows clear to me:
Beauty is a word that has no meaning.
Beauty is naught to me.

He
The last blurred raindrops fall from the half-clear sky,
Eddying lightly, rose-tinged, in the windless wake of the sun.
The swallow ascending against cold waves of cloud
Seems winging upward over huge bleak stairs of stone.
The raindrop finds its way to the heart of the leaf-bud.
But no word finds its way to the heart of you.

She
This also is clear in the stream of my sensation:
That I am content, for the moment, Let me be.
How light the new grass looks with the rain-dust on it!
But heart is a word that has no meaning,
Heart means nothing to me.

He
To the end of the world I pass and back again
In flights of the mind; yet always find you here,
Remote, pale, unattached . . . O Circe-too-clear-eyed,
Watching amused your fawning tiger-thoughts,
Your wolves, your grotesque apes, relent, relent!
Be less wary for once: it is the evening.

She
But if I close my eyes what howlings greet me!
Do not persuade. Be tranquil. Here is flesh
With all its demons. Take it, sate yourself.
But leave my thoughts to me.


Scheme Abcbxxx Accada Axcxxxx Acaxda Axxxxxd Aaxxa
Poetic Form
Metre 1 1111100111110 1101010101 011110111010 1111111111 010101011010 01011110111 1 01111011 111100111010 01111111 1010111110 101111 1 0111110111 110110011101 010010011111 110101011111 011111011011 11111110111 1 1101100111010 111101010111 110111101111 1110111110 111011 1 101101110101 0110111111 0110111111 1001110101 1110110101 11101111010 1 1111111111 1101110111 1111011101 111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,474
Words 286
Sentences 24
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 7, 6, 7, 5
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 192
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Conrad Potter Aiken

Conrad Potter Aiken was a Pulitzer Prize-winning American author born in Savannah Georgia whose work includes poetry short stories novels and an autobiography more…

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