Analysis of Life



All of us are given life-
And a space in which to live it.
There’s a botta poured out for you
Of choices, needs, and riches-
For you to pare it.

What-have-you-done?
How much of each day’s portion-
Have you wasted?
What percentage have you developed-
To benefit man?

As years wane on
Some portion is poured,
A smaller amount to use-
It had to be shared.

When the botta tips the last drop-
Of the honey of life;
That maleable juice to fashion the truth,
Or enriching the future by reshaping the past,
Will you truth say – I fought?
I shaped? I served? I wrought?

When the botta is empty-
Will you lie with a smile-
That says, - “I was.”?


Scheme ABXXB CCXXX XXXX XAXXDD XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 00101111 10101111 1101010 11111 1111 1111110 1110 101011010 11001 1111 11011 0100111 11111 10101011 101011 11111001 1010010101001 111111 111111 1010110 111101 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 662
Words 127
Sentences 13
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 6, 3
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted by dougnoel on July 27, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Douglas Noel

Douglas is a published poet who have been accorded several awards for his poetry. He is a former teacher of 40 years the last 13 of which focused on teaching middle school children to write especially using various poetic forms. more…

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