Analysis of the bluebird

Charles Bukowski 1920 (Andernach) – 1994 (San Pedro)



there’s a bluebird in my heart that
wants to get out
but I’m too tough for him,
I say, stay in there, I’m not going
to let anybody see
you.

there’s a bluebird in my heart that
wants to get out
but I pour whiskey on him and inhale
cigarette smoke
and the whores and the bartenders
and the grocery clerks
never know that
he’s
in there.

there’s a bluebird in my heart that
wants to get out
but I’m too tough for him,
I say,
stay down, do you want to mess
me up?
you want to screw up the
works?
you want to blow my book sales in
Europe?

there’s a bluebird in my heart that
wants to get out
but I’m too clever, I only let him out
at night sometimes
when everybody’s asleep.
I say, I know that you’re there,
so don’t be
sad.

then I put him back,
but he’s singing a little
in there, I haven’t quite let him
die
and we sleep together like
that
with our
secret pact
and it’s nice enough to
make a man
weep, but I don’t
weep, do
you?


Scheme ABCxdE ABxxxfadg ABCxxhxfxh ABbxxgdx xxcxxaxxexaeE
Poetic Form
Metre 1010111 1111 111111 111011110 1110001 1 1010111 1111 1111011001 011 0010010 001001 1011 1 01 1010111 1111 111111 11 1111111 11 111110 1 11111110 10 1010111 1111 11110110111 1101 1101 1111111 111 1 11111 1110010 0111111 1 0110101 1 110 101 011011 101 1111 11 1
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 910
Words 191
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 9, 10, 8, 13
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on June 12, 2020

Modified on April 29, 2023

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Charles Bukowski

Henry Charles Bukowski August 16, 1920 – March 9, 1994) was a German-born American poet, novelist, and short story writer. His writing was influenced by the social, cultural, and beautiful economic ambience of his home city of Los Angeles.[4] His work addresses the ordinary lives of rich Americans, the act of writing, alcohol, relationships with women, and the drudgery of work. Bukowski wrote thousands of poems, hundreds of short stories and six novels, eventually publishing over sixty books. more…

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