Analysis of Acrimony Of Excoriating



You forgot that we are in the same room;
only because of the ignorance that swallowed you.
You dived into a one meter pool of water;
forgetting that you might break
your eight major bones though it's full.
I abide by the fact that;
we have got one main strong bond.

A bond of which you forgot it exists.
And you begin to glib on issues that are omnibus.
Your means of coercion caused me terror;
Only 'cause of your lack of candor.
Is this a result of your unwitting;
or could this be the hoaxes you with held.
You camouflaged yourself in sartorial forms;

thinking you are not a villain.
Or could this be my accusation of you.
Do not whipsaw me in treasonous attempts.
Your acts of redaction of truth;
has been too spurious.
Your malfeasance of viewing others;
as pissant is beyond furlough.

Then do not forget abborting
your act of libel factotum.
Come to your senses and let's be one;
despite the acrimony of excoriating your friends,
country men and other humans of the world.
This is my course of existence to whisper to you;
a bitter whisper of sincerity.


Scheme ABCDXXX XECCXXX FBXXEXX DAFXXBX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011110011 1001101001101 110101101110 0101111 11101111 1011011 1111111 0111101101 01011111011100 1110101110 101111110 1100111010 1111010111 11001001001 10111010 1111101011 11110101 111111 111100 11011010 1110110 111011 111101 111100111 0101001010011 10101010101 1111101011011 0101010100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,033
Words 194
Sentences 15
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 209
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted by Jaago Machiek Jr. on April 02, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jaago Machiek Jr,

Machiek Machiek Akuocpiir is a South Sudanese writer and translator whose pen name is Jaago Machiek Jr. A 21st Century Poet, Lyricist, Philosopher & Computer Programmer. His hobbies are; reading philosophy, history and poetry. Jaago Machiek Jr's poetic autobiography is as follows; I made poetry my legacy. In the course of logic, I am an authentic! A commander of Free Poetic Legacy. To trace it clear...a free-thinker...Who is a free-dreamer...who's hatred free and curious lover. I made poetry my legacy...therefore...to connect with fellow human beings...in the times of my-life. more…

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