Analysis of Electric kingdom



Isn't it a pity when you hate the city
So no damn good with snake pit lion's den you need someone to be your friend
Like Mickey Mouse & Daffy Duck chasing each other in a bush
The whole wide world is in quite a rush
Yet such a kingdom does exist
Can you catch my drift
In a far off place in search of trace in
A child hood fantasy in a dream whole new scene
With dragons and kings with queens
A court jester killing the village scene
We got trolls living in holes with dirt as their ceiling
Nothing shady in my electric kingdom
Lot's of folks tripping cause I'm on a mission
A vision of twilight sun tainting the vast array of its sparkling ellagance
Such extravagance at first glance a timely dance with a fare maiden
Looking lips shooting hits take some time to move those hips
A sought off excursion in my mind cause the dragon got me in a fix
I mix with tempers of fire blown up in full desire
An angry elf just bit me in the arm so sound the alarm
I came to get down & paint to village town
Electric kingdom where the creatures are so real
Some may claim it as a no good deal
Horses with valiant lances never given any second chances
Took a crap in the distant bushes with a push in
This is a place inside my mind some call me crazy but I am not blind
Rap is good in this place of dreams holding my own as my vison gleams.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIHJKLILMNOPQRRSGTU
Poetic Form
Metre 101010111010 11111111011111111 110110110110001 011110101 11010101 11111 0011101110 011100001111 1100111 0110100101 1111001111110 10100101010 11110111010 01011110010111101 10100111010110110 1011011111111 011010011101011001 111101101101010 110111100111001 1111111101 010101010111 111110111 1011011010101010 1010010101010 110101111111011111 1110111110111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,331
Words 273
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,068
Words per stanza (avg) 269
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Submitted by hitalot on July 30, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:21 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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