Analysis of A Child's Hair

William Watson 1858 (Burley in Wharfedale) – 1935 (Rottingdean)



A letter from abroad. I tear
Its sheathing open, unaware
What treasure gleams within; and there-
Like bird from cage-
Flutters a curl of golden hair
Out of the page.

From such a frolic head 'twas shorn!
('Tis but five years since he was born.)
Not sunlight scampering over corn
Were merrier thing.
A child? A fragment of the morn,
A piece of Spring!

Surely an ampler, fuller day
Than drapes our English skies with grey-
A deeper light, a richer ray
Than here we know-
To this bright tress have given away
Their living glow.

For Willie dwells where gentian flowers
Make mimic sky in mountain bowers;
And vineyards steeped in ardent hours
Slope to the wave
Where storied Chillon's tragic towers
Their bases lave;

And over piny tracts of Vaud
The rose of eve steals up the snow;
And on the waters far below
Strange sails like wings
Half-bodilessly come and go,
Fantastic things;

And tender night falls like a sigh
On
châlet
low and
château
high;
And the far cataract's voice comes nigh,
Where no man hears;
And spectral peaks impale the sky
On silver spears.

Ah, Willie, whose dissevered tress
Lies in my hand!-may you possess
At least one sovereign happiness,
Ev'n to your grave;
One boon than which I ask naught less,
Naught greater crave:

May cloud and mountain, lake and vale,
Never to you be trite or stale
As unto souls whose wellsprings fail
Or flow defiled,
Till Nature's happiest fairy-tale
Charms not her child!

For when the spirit waxes numb,
Alien and strange these shows become,
And stricken with life's tedium
The streams run dry,
The choric spheres themselves are dumb,
And dead the sky,-

Dead as to captives grown supine,
Chained to their task in sightless mine:
Above, the bland day smiles benign,
Birds carol free,
In thunderous throes of life divine
Leaps the glad sea;

But they-their day and night are one.
What is't to them, that rivulets run,
Or what concern of theirs the sun?
It seems as though
Their business with these things was done
Ages ago:

Only, at times, each dulled heart feels
That somewhere, sealed with hopeless seals,
The unmeaning heaven about him reels,
And he lies hurled
Beyond the roar of all the wheels
Of all the world.

On what strange track one's fancies fare!
To eyeless night in sunless lair
'Tis a far cry from Willie's hair;
And here it lies-
Human, yet something which can ne'er
Grow sad and wise:

Which, when the head where late it lay
In life's grey dusk itself is grey,
And when the curfew of life's day
By death is tolled,
Shall forfeit not the auroral ray
And eastern gold.


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Poetic Form Burns stanza  (77%)
Metre 01010111 1101001 11010101 1111 10011101 1101 11010111 11111111 11100101 01001 01010101 0111 1011101 111010111 01010101 1111 111111001 1101 110111010 110101010 010101010 1101 11011010 1101 01010111 01111101 01010101 1111 11101 0101 01011101 1 11 10 11 1 0011111 1111 0110101 1101 110111 10111101 11110100 11111 11111111 1101 11010101 10111111 1101111 111 110100101 1101 11010101 100011101 01011100 0111 01010111 0101 11110101 1111011 01011101 1101 010011101 1011 11110111 11111111 11011101 1111 11011111 1001 10111111 1111101 01100111 0111 01011101 1101 11111101 1101011 10111101 0111 10110111 1101 11011111 01110111 01010111 1111 110100101 0101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,451
Words 457
Sentences 17
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 10, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 88
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 29, 2023

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William Watson

William Watson, was a surgeon in the 105th Regiment of Pennsylvania Volunteers during the American Civil War. more…

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