Analysis of A Commonplace Day

Thomas Hardy 1840 (Stinsford) – 1928 (Dorchester, Dorset)



The day is turning ghost,
And scuttles from the kalendar in fits and furtively,
   To join the anonymous host
Of those that throng oblivion; ceding his place, maybe,
   To one of like degree.

I part the fire-gnawed logs,
Rake forth the embers, spoil the busy flames, and lay the ends
   Upon the shining dogs;
Further and further from the nooks the twilight's stride extends,
   And beamless black impends.

Nothing of tiniest worth
Have I wrought, pondered, planned; no one thing asking blame or
praise,
   Since the pale corpse-like birth
Of this diurnal unit, bearing blanks in all its rays -
   Dullest of dull-hued Days!

Wanly upon the panes
The rain slides as have slid since morn my colourless thoughts; and
yet
   Here, while Day's presence wanes,
And over him the sepulchre-lid is slowly lowered and set,
   He wakens my regret.

Regret--though nothing dear
That I wot of, was toward in the wide world at his prime,
   Or bloomed elsewhere than here,
To die with his decease, and leave a memory sweet, sublime,
   Or mark him out in Time . . .

--Yet, maybe, in some soul,
In some spot undiscerned on sea or land, some impulse rose,
   Or some intent upstole
Of that enkindling ardency from whose maturer glows
   The world's amendment flows;

But which, benumbed at birth
By momentary chance or wile, has missed its hope to be
   Embodied on the earth;
And undervoicings of this loss to man's futurity
   May wake regret in me.


Scheme ABABB CDXDC EXFEFF GXHGHH XIXII XJBJJ EBEAB
Poetic Form
Metre 011101 01101010100 11001001 11110100101110 111101 1101011 11010101010101 010101 1001010101101 0111 1011001 1111011111011 1 101111 11010101010111 101111 10101 011111111110 1 111101 01010111101001 11101 011101 11111010011111 11111 111101010100101 111101 110011 011111111101 11011 11111111 010101 11111 1100111111111 010101 01111111 110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,459
Words 245
Sentences 9
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 6, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 29, 2023

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Thomas Hardy

Thomas Hardy, was not a Scottish Minister, not a Moderator of the General Assembly of the Church of Scotland nor a Professor of Eccesiastical History at Edinburgh University. more…

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