Analysis of The Hell-Bound Train



A Texas cowboy lay down on a barroom floor,
Having drunk so much he could drink no more;
So he fell asleep with a troubled brain
To dream that he rode on a hell-bound train.

The engine with murderous blood was damp
And was brilliantly lit with a brimstone lamp;
An imp, for fuel, was shoveling bones,
While the furnace rang with a thousand groans.

The boiler was filled with lager beer
And the devil himself was the engineer;
The passengers were a most motley crew-
Church member, atheist, Gentile, and Jew,

Rich men in broad cloth, beggars in rags,
Handsome young ladies, and withered old hags,
Yellow and black men, red, brown, and white,
All chained together-O God, what a sight!

While the train rushed on at an awful pace-
The sulphurous fumes scorched their hands and face;
Wider and wider the country grew,
As faster and faster the engine flew.
Louder and louder the thunder crashed
And brighter and brighter the lightning flashed;
Hotter and hotter the air became
Till the clothes were burned from each quivering frame.

And out of the distance there arose a yell,
'Ha, ha,' said the devil, 'we're nearing hell'
Then oh, how the passengers all shrieked with pain
And begged the devil to stop the train.
But he capered about and danced for glee,
And laughed and joked at their misery.
'My faithful friends, you have done the work
And the devil never can a payday shirk.

'You've bullied the weak, you've robbed the poor,
The starving brother you've turned from the door;
You've laid up gold where the canker rust,
And have given free vent to your beastly lust.
'You've justice scorned, and corruption sown,
And trampled the laws of nature down.
You have drunk, rioted, cheated, plundered, and lied,
And mocked at God in your hell-born pride.

'You have paid full fare, so I'll carry you through,
For it's only right you should have your due.
Why, the laborer always expects his hire,
So I'll land you safe in the lake of fire,

'Where your flesh will waste in the flames that roar,
And my imps torment you forevermore.'
Then the cowboy awoke with an anguished cry,
His clothes wet with sweat and his hair standing high.

Then he prayed as he never had prayed till that hour
To be saved from his sin and the demon's power;
And his prayers and his vows were not in vain,
For he never rode the hell-bound train.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF XDGG HHFFIIJJ KKBBLLMM XANNXXOO FFPP AAQQ PPBB
Poetic Form
Metre 0101111011 1011111111 1110110101 1111110111 0101100111 01100110101 111101101 1010110101 010111101 00100110101 0100001101 110100101 110111001 1011001011 100111101 1101011101 1011111101 01111101 100100101 1100100101 100100101 0100100101 100100101 10101111001 01101010101 1110101101 11101001111 010101101 111010111 010111100 110111101 0010101011 110011101 0101011101 111110101 0110111111 110100101 010011101 111100101001 011101111 11111111011 1110111111 10100101110 11111001110 1111100111 011111 1010111101 11111011101 1111110111110 11111100110 0110110101 111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,275
Words 419
Sentences 16
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 8, 8, 8, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 180
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 03, 2023

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