Analysis of Ghazal 01

Shams al-Din Hafiz 1315 (Shiraz) – 1390 (Shiraz)



O beautiful wine-bearer, bring forth the cup and put it to my lips
Path of love seemed easy at first, what came was many hardships.
With its perfume, the morning breeze unlocks those beautiful locks
The curl of those dark ringlets, many hearts to shreds strips.
In the house of my Beloved, how can I enjoy the feast
Since the church bells call the call that for pilgrimage equips.
With wine color your robe, one of the old Magi’s best tips
Trust in this traveler’s tips, who knows of many paths and trips.
The dark midnight, fearful waves, and the tempestuous whirlpool
How can he know of our state, while ports house his unladen ships.
I followed my own path of love, and now I am in bad repute
How can a secret remain veiled, if from every tongue it drips?
If His presence you seek, Hafiz, then why yourself eclipse?
Stick to the One you know, let go of imaginary trips.

© Shahriar Shahriari
Los Angeles, Ca
April 9, 1999


Scheme AAXAXAAAXAXAAA XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11001101101011111 111110111111010 11010101111001 011111101111 00111011110101 10111011110001 1110111101111 101100111110101 011101001001 11111101111111 1101111101110101 1101001111100111 1110111110101 11011111101001 11 11001 10
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 920
Words 173
Sentences 9
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 14, 3
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 362
Words per stanza (avg) 86
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shams al-Din Hafiz

Khwāja Shams-ud-Dīn Muḥammad Ḥāfeẓ-e Shīrāzī (Persian: خواجه شمس‌‌الدین محمد حافظ شیرازی‎), known by his pen name Hafez (حافظ, Ḥāfeẓ, 'the memorizer; the (safe) keeper' and as "Hafiz", was a Persian poet who "lauded the joys of love and wine but also targeted religious hypocrisy". more…

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