Analysis of Our Fathers of Old

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



Excellent herbs had our fathers of old--
Excellent herbs to ease their pain--
Alexanders and Marigold,
Eyebright, Orris, and Elecampane--
Basil, Rocket, Valerian, Rue,
( Almost singing themselves they run)
Vervain, Dittany, Call-me-to-you--
Cowslip, Melilot, Rose of the Sun.
Anything green that grew out of the mould
Was an excellent herb to our fathers of old.

Wonderful tales had our fathers of old,
Wonderful tales of the herbs and the stars-
The Sun was Lord of the Marigold,
Basil and Rocket belonged to Mars.
Pat as a sum in division it goes--
(Every herb had a planet bespoke)--
Who but Venus should govern the Rose?
Who but Jupiter own the Oak?
Simply and gravely the facts are told
In the wonderful books of our fathers of old.

Wonderful little, when all is said,
Wonderful little our fathers knew.
Half their remedies cured you dead--
Most of their teaching was quite untrue--
"Look at the stars when a patient is ill.
(Dirt has nothing to do with disease),
Bleed and blister as much as you will,
Bister and bleed him as oft as you please."
Whence enormous and manifold
Errors were made by our fathers of old.

Yet when the sickness was sore in the land,
And neither planets nor herbs assuaged,
They took their lives in their lancet-hand
And, oh, what a wonderful war they waged!
Yes, when the crosses were chalked on the door-
(Yes, when the terrible dead-cart rolled! )
Excellent courage our fathers bore--
None too learned, but nobly bold
Into the fight went our fathers of old.

If it be certain, as Galen says--
And sage Hippocrates holds as much--
"That those afflicted by doubts and dismays
Are mightily helped by a dead man's touch,"
Then, be good to us, stars above!
Then, be good to us, herbs below!
We are afflicted by what we can prove,
We are distracted by what we know.
So-ah, so!
Down from your heaven or up from your mould
Send us the hearts of our Fathers of old!


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Poetic Form Etheree  (26%)
Tetractys  (22%)
Metre 10011101011 10011111 010010 11001 101001001 1100111 111111 1011101 101111101 1110011101011 10011101011 1001101001 01111010 100100111 1101001011 100110101 111011001 11100101 100100111 0010011101011 100101111 1001010101 11100111 111101101 1101101011 111011101 101011111 101111111 1010010 10011101011 1101011001 010101101 111101101 0110100111 1101001101 110100111 1001010101 1111101 01011101011 111101101 0110111 1101011001 1100110111 11111101 11111101 1101011111 110101111 111 1111011111 11011101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,848
Words 342
Sentences 19
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 10, 9, 11
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 292
Words per stanza (avg) 68
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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