Analysis of When It is Finished

Marjorie Lowry Christie Pickthall 1883 (Gunnersbury, London) – 1922 (Vancouver)



WHEN it is finished, Father, and we set
The war-stained buckler and the bright blade by,
Bid us remember then what bloody sweat,
What thorns, what agony
Purchased our wreaths of harvest and ripe ears,
Whose empty hands, whose empty hearts, whose tears
Ransomed the days to be.

We leave them to Thee, Father, we've no price,
No utmost treasure of the seas and lands,
No words, no deeds, to pay their sacrifice.
Only while England stands,
Their pearl, their pride, their altar, not their grave,
Bid us remember in what days they gave
All that mankind may give
That we might live.


Scheme AXABXXB CDCDEEXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 1111010011 01110000111 1101011101 111100 10101110011 1101110111 10111 1111110111 111010101 111111110 101101 1111110111 1101001111 111111 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 571
Words 105
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 8
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 226
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 04, 2023

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Marjorie Lowry Christie Pickthall

Marjorie Lowry Christie Pickthall, was a Canadian writer who was born in England but lived in Canada from the time she was seven. She was once "thought to be the best Canadian poet of her generation." more…

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