Analysis of Love's Coming

John Shaw Neilson 1872 (Penola, South Australia) – 1942 (Melbourne, Victoria)



QUIETLY as rosebuds   
 Talk to thin air,   
Love came so lightly   
 I knew not he was there.   

Quietly as lovers           
 Creep at the middle noon,   
Softly as players tremble   
 In the tears of a tune;   

Quietly as lilies   
 Their faint vows declare,           
Came the shy pilgrim:   
 I knew not he was there.   

Quietly as tears fall   
 On a warm sin,   
Softly as griefs call           
 In a violin;   

Without hail or tempest,   
 Blue sword or flame,   
Love came so lightly   
 I knew not that he came.


Scheme abCB adxd abxB efef xgCg
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 10011 1111 11110 111111 100110 110101 1011010 001101 100110 11101 10110 111111 100111 1011 10111 00001 011110 1111 11110 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 520
Words 87
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 04, 2023

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John Shaw Neilson

John Shaw Neilson was an Australian poet. Slightly built, for most of his life he worked as a labourer, fruit-picking, clearing scrub, navvying and working in quarries, and, after 1928, working as a messenger with the Country Roads Board in Melbourne. he died when he was 70 years old. more…

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