Analysis of War Song



In anguish we uplift
A new unhallowed song:
The race is to the swift;
The battle to the strong.

Of old it was ordained
That we, in packs like curs,
Some thirty million trained
And licensed murderers,

In crime should live and act,
If cunning folk say sooth
Who flay the naked fact
And carve the heart of truth.

The rulers cry aloud,
"We cannot cancel war,
The end and bloody shroud
Of wrongs the worst abhor,
And order's swaddling band:
Know that relentless strife
Remains by sea and land
The holiest law of life.
From fear in every guise,
From sloth, from lust of pelf,
By war's great sacrifice
The world redeems itself.
War is the source, the theme
Of art; the goal, the bent
And brilliant academe
Of noble sentiment;
The augury, the dawn
Of golden times of grace;
The true catholicon,
And blood-bath of the race."

We thirty million trained
And licensed murderers,
Like zanies rigged, and chained
By drill and scourge and curse
In shackles of despair
We know not how to break --
What do we victims care
For art, what interest take
In things unseen, unheard?
Some diplomat no doubt
Will launch a heedless word,
And lurking war leap out!

We spell-bound armies then,
Huge brutes in dumb distress,
Machines compact of men
Who once had consciences,
Must trample harvests down --
Vineyard, and corn and oil;
Dismantle town by town,
Hamlet and homestead spoil
On each appointed path,
Till lust of havoc light
A blood-red blaze of wrath
In every frenzied sight.

In many a mountain pass,
Or meadow green and fresh,
Mass shall encounter mass
Of shuddering human flesh;
Opposing ordnance roar
Across the swaths of slain,
And blood in torrents pour
In vain -- always in vain,
For war breeds war again!

The shameful dream is past,
The subtle maze untrod:
We recognise at last
That war is not of God.


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Poetic Form
Metre 010110 0111 011101 010101 111101 110111 110101 010100 011101 110111 110101 010111 010101 110101 010101 110101 01011 110101 011101 0100111 1101001 111111 11110 010101 110101 110101 01010 110100 0101 110111 011 011101 110101 010100 11101 110101 010101 111111 111101 111101 010101 11011 11011 010111 111101 110101 011011 111100 110101 100101 010111 10011 110101 111101 011111 0100101 0100101 11101 110101 1100101 010101 010111 010101 01101 111101 010111 01011 1111 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,795
Words 323
Sentences 11
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 20, 12, 12, 9, 4
Lines Amount 69
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 176
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 20, 2023

1:37 min read
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John Davidson

John Wynn Davidson was a brigadier general in the United States Army during the American Civil War and an American Indian fighter. more…

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