Analysis of About Love
I’ve been wondering
lately,
about love —
how it dies,
and where it goes
when it does…
I suppose some loves
die quickly, silently —
deprived of oxygen,
strangled with care.
Some may free-fall
through ocean depths,
weighted down,
sinking slowly,
then quickly —
a silent
thud.
Others may slow-burn
in a desert bonfire,
struggling embers
whimpering,
cries unheard —
ashes left behind,
or not a trace
of having been.
Maybe there’s
a love heaven,
where once
loving spirits
spend eternity…
I’d like to think that.
Once upon a time,
I cried over this —
Tears ran like a river…
One day,
they froze
in my eyes.
River creatures,
prisoners
in chunks of ice —
My heart too.
The thaw is slow…
Scheme | ABXCDX XBEX XXXBBXX XFGAXXXE CEXXBX XXF XDC GGXX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11100 10 011 111 0111 111 10111 110100 011100 1011 1111 1101 101 1010 110 010 1 10111 001010 10010 100 101 10101 1101 1101 101 0110 11 1010 10100 11111 10101 11101 111010 11 11 011 1010 100 0111 111 0111 |
Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 854 |
Words | 164 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 4, 7, 8, 6, 3, 3, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 42 |
Letters per line (avg) | 12 |
Words per line (avg) | 3 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 58 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 14 |
About this poem
I think most of us have experienced, or will at some time experience, the death of love. In this poem, love is something tangible and alive, that meets its end in several ways. And I wonder, is there a special heaven where once loving spirits spend eternity? I’m not sure, but I hope so.
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Written on February 14, 2025
Submitted by susan.brumel on March 11, 2025
Modified by susan.brumel on March 11, 2025
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