Analysis of About Love



I’ve been wondering
lately,
about love —
how it dies,
and where it goes
when it does…

I suppose some loves
    die quickly, silently —
    deprived of oxygen,    
    strangled with care.

Some may free-fall
through ocean depths,
weighted down,
sinking slowly,
then quickly —
a silent
thud.

Others may slow-burn
    in a desert bonfire,
    struggling embers
    whimpering,
    cries unheard —
    ashes left behind,
    or not a trace
    of having been.

Maybe there’s
a love heaven,
where once
loving spirits
spend eternity…
I’d like to think that.

Once upon a time,
    I cried over this —
    Tears ran like a river…

One day,
they froze
in my eyes.

River creatures,
    prisoners
    in chunks of ice —
    My heart too.

The thaw is slow…


Scheme ABXCDX XBEX XXXBBXX XFGAXXXE CEXXBX XXF XDC GGXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11100 10 011 111 0111 111 10111 110100 011100 1011 1111 1101 101 1010 110 010 1 10111 001010 10010 100 101 10101 1101 1101 101 0110 11 1010 10100 11111 10101 11101 111010 11 11 011 1010 100 0111 111 0111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 854
Words 164
Sentences 7
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 7, 8, 6, 3, 3, 4, 1
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

I think most of us have experienced, or will at some time experience, the death of love. In this poem, love is something tangible and alive, that meets its end in several ways. And I wonder, is there a special heaven where once loving spirits spend eternity? I’m not sure, but I hope so.

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Written on February 14, 2025

Submitted by susan.brumel on March 11, 2025

Modified by susan.brumel on March 11, 2025

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Susan Mayer Brumel

A few years ago, I retired from a thirty-five year career in hospice counseling, at which time I began writing poetry. My poems are influenced by my patients’ journeys, the compelling beauty of nature, and the human condition. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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