Analysis of Her Lips Are Copper Wire

Jean Toomer 1894 (Washington, D.C.) – 1967 (Doylestown)



whisper of yellow globes
gleaming on lamp-posts that sway
like bootleg licker drinkers in the fog

and let your breath be moist against me
like bright beads on yellow globes

telephone the power-house
that the main wires are insulate

(her words play softly up and down
dewy corridors of billboards)

then with your tongue remove the tape
and press your lips to mine
till they are incandescent


Scheme AXX XA XX XX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101101 1011111 111010001 011111011 1111101 100101 10110110 01110101 1010011 11110101 011111 111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 386
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 3
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jean Toomer

Jean Toomer was an American poet and novelist and an important figure of the Harlem Renaissance. more…

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