Analysis of Evening Song

Jean Toomer 1894 (Washington, D.C.) – 1967 (Doylestown)



Full moon rising on the waters of my heart,
Lakes and moon and fires,
Cloine tires,
Holding her lips apart.

Promises of slumber leaving shore to charm the moon,
Miracle made vesper-keeps,
Cloine sleeps,
And I'll be sleeping soon.

Cloine, curled like the sleepy waters whtere the moonwaves start,
Radiant, resplendently she gleams,
Cloine dreams,
Lips pressed against my heart.


Scheme ABBA CDDC AEEA
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11101010111 101010 110 100101 1001101011101 1001101 11 011101 111010101011 100111 11 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 373
Words 62
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Jean Toomer

Jean Toomer was an American poet and novelist and an important figure of the Harlem Renaissance. more…

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