Analysis of In the shadows we do live.



In the shadows.

I see children, but they're not playing in their room.

Their innocence lost in the gloom.

Their eyes filled with fear,

Their voices not clear,

In a world filled with impending doom.

They sit in silence, their minds so consumed,

By the darkness that has loomed.

No laughter or joy,

Just sadness and ploy,

In a reality where happiness is entombed.

What happened to the days of carefree delight?

When laughter echoed through the night.

Now they're burdened with worry,

Their hearts feeling heavy,

In a world where childhood takes flight.

But we must not give up on their dreams.

We must light a spark, so it seems.

To bring back their smiles if only for a little while.

And erase the miles,

Of sadness that haunts their young schemes.


Scheme X A A B B A C C D D C E E F F E G G X X G
Poetic Form
Metre 001 111011110011 11001001 11111 11011 001110101 1101011101 1010111 11011 11001 00101100101 1101011101 11010101 1110110 111010 0011111 111111111 11101111 1111111010101 00101 11011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 776
Words 181
Sentences 14
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 28
Words per stanza (avg) 6

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This poems about all the unfortunate kids.

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Written on January 23, 2025

Submitted by alanswansea18 on January 23, 2025

Modified by alanswansea18 on February 16, 2025

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