Analysis of Mother Universe
Hits hitting from all corners of the earth,
With no corner to run to, for a rest.
This one feels more like a test!
Slowly, losing patience.
Life become better with acceptance,
I know!
Emotions or rather pain clouding my entire existence,
My soul on the side longing for independence,
Harsh is life.
Fear and worries of failing,
As all I ever seem to do is falling!
Took time to study the life of a bird in a cage,
With only limited space to spread it's wings,
I failed my studies and instead, became the caged bird.
No space to move around or rather, spread my wings.
Dear mother universe, allow me some peace.
Allow me what my soul longs for,
For my soul longs for calmness and rest,
Allow me to spread my wings,
For I, long to fly high.
Scheme | XAABBX BBXCC XDXD XXADX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101110101 1110111101 1111101 101010 101101010 11 0101101101010010 11101101010 111 1010110 11110111110 1111001101001 11010011111 1111000101011 111101110111 1101001111 01111111 111111001 0111111 111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 742 |
Words | 163 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 5, 4, 5 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 143 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
About this poem
It is a poem directed to the universe about the difficulties of life faced by the writer. It is a poem about asking the universe for an easy hand and to express the pain faced by the writer.
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