Analysis of When The Sword Of Sixty Comes Nigh His Head



When the sword of sixty comes nigh his head
give a man no wine, for he is drunk with years.
Age claps a stick in my bridle-hand:
substance spent, health broken,
forgotten the skill to swerve aside from the joust
with the spearhead grazing my eyelashes.

The sentinel perched on the hill top
cannot see the countless army he used to see there:
the black summit's deep in snow
and its lord himself sinning against the army.
He was proud of his two swift couriers:
lo! sixty ruffians have put them in chains.

The singer is weary of his broken voice,
one drone for the bulbul alike and the lion's grousing.

Alas for flowery, musky sappy thirty
and the sharp Persian sword!
The pheasant strutting about the briar,
pomegranate-blossom and cypress sprig!
Since I raised my glass to fifty-eight
I have toasted only the bier and the burial-ground.

I ask the just Creator
so much refuge from Time
that a tale of mine may remain in the world
from this famous book of the ancients
and they who speak of such matters weighing their words
think of that only when they think of me.


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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,048
Words 196
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 2, 6, 6
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Hakim Abu'l-Qasim Ferdowsi Tusi Firdowsi

Abul-Qâsem Ferdowsi Tusi (Persian: ابوالقاسم فردوسی توسی‎), or just Ferdowsi was a Persian poet and the author of Shahnameh ("Book of Kings"), which is one of the world's longest epic poems created by a single poet, and the national epic of Greater Iran. Ferdowsi is celebrated as the most influential figure in Persian literature and one of the greatest in the history of literature. more…

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