Analysis of Ms.Atlanta



She is just so beautiful even with no make up on.
Got me wanting to make love way past the break of dawn.
On the neigh·bors lawn.

How long can I go on letting her slip trough my fingers.
Turned me from a wall flower to a front lead singer.
Like that song from the 90s why you have to let it linger.

Eye contact that made time stand still and it's just so chill.
Like watching frost coat a window from sill to sill.

Girl must have been like this is a real life bumble.
I can't speak right around you. I must be lost in a mumble.
She's a super bowl catch yet I fumble.

Looks like she's a moment gone by
Next year I will see her with another guy
I'll wish I could change it like Marty Mcfly

I was overworked and overthinking.
Then too loosen up tried all that drinking.
The week went to fast I don't know if I had even been blinking.

I stall like a car on the highway if she look my way
The call..If only I didn't play and could say..
Something just anything better then I did that day.

When Ms.Atlanta walks by and I can't even say hi
I crawl deep into my mind and die

Extraordinary looked ordinary when she stands next to it.
She turns the bright colors vibrant and text bold.
Mr.Young I think I found the heart of gold.

But I will speak nevermore because I couldn't speak then.
I'm salty and sore with myself for what happen.   
I wish she stopped walking around in my head..I'm cappen


Scheme ABB XCC DD EEE FFF GGG HHH FF XII XXA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111001011111 1110111110111 10111 11111110011110 1110110101110 11110111111110 111111101111 110110101111 111111101110 111101111110010 1010111110 11101011 11111010101 11111111001 110101 1110111110 0111111111110110 1110110111111 01101101011 101101011111 11110111011 111011101 01001100111111 11011010011 111110111 1111100111011 11001111110 111110010111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,396
Words 309
Sentences 27
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

I'm just reflecting on how I let myself down trying to start a conversation with somebody.

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Written on April 01, 2023

Submitted by 802Kmighty on April 01, 2023

Modified on April 19, 2023

1:36 min read
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