Analysis of MY 1 N ONLY
Contorted..thoughts-twisted-unsorted...Lord why is this?-hurt received consistent- confused as the script has flipped wit supportive "... instead of neglective- my course has..redirected -evil forces.. don't want good let in.. cuz then its a force to reckon..
Thankin' God for ya, empty till I met ya- revvin up my mental..heavier than metal.. friends seen us 2gether..envious..whateva.. let's us know we special..and better off without'em...nevermind'em babe I'm glad I found u.. if they can't see your Heavensent they know nothing about you...
opportunity.. I squandered it.. foolishly.. usually.. its like I never even wanted it, frequently... ego steppin' over the line repeatedly... that's continuity.. perpetual ruining, all the opportunity.... mishaps.. or mistakes or relapse.. more than 2 or 3..all close to me, tryin' to talk truth to me..well talk sense to me.. cuz I was walking senselessly.. realized I became allergic to walking so I'd steal a car so I could rest my feet...instead of just working a job... I thought it'd be more worth it to rob..my network got worse overall as soon as I chose the streets over semesters in fall...didn't know that'd be a cause for me destined to fall..you know gettin' arrested and all.. laws I would break, drugs I would take, friends who were fake, panned out fools gold with choices I'd make...blinded.. no selective sight.. the opportunities I chose to take up got me sentences, but not sentenced to life..Time should be served.. yet I can't deny I had better opportunities first...(pt.1)
would u believe my struggle was more that origin? disfunctional.. alone in environment with whom wasn't even my own skin..not ya typical..upbringing.. yet love ones who was present.. seen as secondary.. very scary.. and still pops was missin'..how do I view a world being so young with not any Promise's given? (to be continued).
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110111110101001101111010011111110101111011101110 1111101111111111011111111110111111111111111110011 010011011001000111101010110010110010100101000100100100100110110111111111111111111111101101010101101110111111111100111101111111111011111011001001110101111011110100111111111110111111101110101001001111111100111011111111011110010011 11011101111001010010011101011111111111011100101001111111011011111011011010 |
Characters | 1,874 |
Words | 326 |
Sentences | 55 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 4 |
Letters per line (avg) | 354 |
Words per line (avg) | 75 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 354 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 75 |
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LIFE MOVING
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