Analysis of Trying to Talk About My Cancer



Trying To Write About MY Cancer

“Come back, in a few days”
                                                              William Epson

Leaves that ordinarily fall
in bunches of bright autumn hues
are falling to my surprise,
one grey leaf at a time for me.
A single leaf breaks off
at its stem to pause the season  
allowing my elbow to bend and rake
my imagination for the color
each leaf was before it died


Scheme A XB XXXXXBXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 101101110 110011 1010 1101001 01011101 1101101 11110111 010111 11111010 010111101 100101010 1110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 456
Words 75
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 9
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

I was diagnosed with colon cancer in late 2020 and have undergone colorectal surgery. I was cancer-free for 12 months but it showed up in my liver. Surgery again in Feb. 2023. I have a "Cancer Journal" but haven't been able or willing to write many poems about the disease I am "surviving". The submitted is an attempt to do so.

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Written on March 16, 2023

Submitted by connectallan on March 24, 2023

Modified on April 20, 2023

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Clarence Allan Ebert

As I mentioned; a Baby Boomer fighting cancer - first colon and now a little in my liver. Been writing poetry for a long time but never more so than during the COVID pandemic. Just trying to remain relevant. more…

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