Analysis of spring walk



Sun
lukewarm
blue sky afternoon

a hoodie
no direction
city streets
and a smooth tune

dusk
crisp
drizzle

mind wandering
feet following
time
melting away

dark
cold
wet concrete

traffic lights
rhythmic
blinking yellow
remind me it's late

back
in the room

remaining
till morning

the
night's ash


Scheme AXB CAXB XXX DDXX XCC XXXC XX DD XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1 11 1101 01 1010 101 0011 1 1 10 1100 1100 1 1001 1 1 101 101 10 1010 01111 1 001 010 110 0 11
Characters 314
Words 64
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3, 4, 3, 4, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 9
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted by Traian06 on March 18, 2023

Modified by Traian06 on March 26, 2023

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