Analysis of A face-to-face with the Lord



Gets a lot of attention
Says that He is Son of God.
Has come to deliver.
To make clear a glorious Path.
Has a lot of great stories.
Promises of the good to come.
Yeah, good he says in this Roman
Tributary, being drained dry.
Being humiliated by chains and whips.
And taxes.

I run a dry goods business.
Cut a few corners
Have to do it, I believe.
Otherwise, Marcus, down
The Lane gets the market trade.
Money made but so very tired.
Hardly see my family
Work is so demanding.
Oh here comes that Man so sturdy
Surrounded by cheers, adulation.
He is not rude in getting them
Out of the way? I think He targets me.

Gets close…in my face.
Looking on, silently.
His eyes seem to hold wonders.
His aroma noticeable and pleasant.
Does He know?
Know what’s out of whack
With me and my choices?
My compromising?
Yes, think He does, but seemingly
It’ alright at this moment.
All right.
His smile continues, and
He stays here close.
I feel emptied.
I am strangely warmed.
Forgiven?


Scheme AXXXXXAXXB XCXXXXDEDAXD XDCFXXBEDFXXXXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1011010 1111111 111010 11101001 1011110 10010111 11110110 1001011 1001001101 010 1101110 10110 1111101 10101 0110101 101111010 1011100 111010 11111110 01011010 11110101 1101111101 11011 101100 1111110 10101000010 111 10111 110110 1100 11111100 111110 11 110100 1111 1110 11101 010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,013
Words 219
Sentences 29
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 12, 16
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 249
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Written on March 07, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 15, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on March 15, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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