Analysis of Brother



I felt guilty.
Guilty because I couldn’t help.
Help the kindest human I know.
I know that because he always comes through.
Comes through to my aid whenever I ask.
Today he asked but I couldn’t come through.
I wasn’t stringy. I had financial constraints.

Then why is all this guilt?
Is this how helplessness feels .
I never want to feel this again.
But this is life.
I know I will encounter even worse.
We can only hope it only gets better.
We can only work towards making it better.
We can only hope we endure the turbulence.
And atleast feel helpful.


Scheme XXXAXAX XXXXXBBXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1001111 10101011 111011111 1111101011 011111111 11101101001 111111 1111001 110111101 1111 1111010101 11101110110 111010110110 111011010100 01110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 644
Words 127
Sentences 19
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 9
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 215
Words per stanza (avg) 52

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I felt guilty. Guilty because I couldn’t help. Help the kindest human I know. I know that because he always comes through. Comes through to my aid whenever I ask. Today he asked but I couldn’t come through. I wasn’t stringy. I had financial constraints. Then why is all this guilt? Is this how helplessness feels . I never want to feel this again. But this is life. I know I will encounter even worse. We can only hope it only gets better. We can only work towards making it better. We can only hope we endure the turbulence. And atleast feel helpful. PayPal; juslive13576@gmail.com Bitcoin: bc1q8hd6s8pascr8tktfnss4zrpagza9xapml7pggn 

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Submitted by Banbeast on February 07, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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