Analysis of Shattered eyes



When God looks in a mirror,
How many mirrors does he see?
Yours, mine,
Or all the mirrors, in eternity?

When God sees a heart,
How many hearts does he see?
Yours, mine, or only one?
One heart! That is free!?

When God feels the air,
How many airs does he breath?
Yours, heavens, or a macrocosm
That we have yet to weave?

When God leads a debate
How many debates does he argue?
Yours, mine, the microcosm
Or are they all and none of value?


Scheme XAXA XAXA XXBX XCBC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 1110010 11010111 11 1101000100 11101 1101111 111101 11111 11101 1101111 110101 111111 111001 110011110 110100 111101110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 441
Words 101
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on February 07, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 07, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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