Analysis of When A Friend Is Naught (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



When Is A Friend Naught   (Bussokusekika)

When is a friend naught
When they are preoccupied
When they are drowning
When they can not find meaning
When they no longer have hope
When even their dreams have died

Edwin Tanguma   2/6/2023


Scheme A XBAAXB X
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 11011 111010 11110 1111110 1111011 1101111 10010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 236
Words 43
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

I was just trying to be creative, for a poetess friend…And this poem is the result… Though my dreams are not dead yet…

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Written on February 06, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on February 06, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on February 07, 2023

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