Analysis of ought a be a law



now I am forced to get a shot that makes my knees wobbly.
and forced to get erratic's
post office cheat Bobby's
all I wanted was a chance to have visiters at
me and my mothers house
not to get killed off
from a proper spouse
content to live with me in my mothers care too
instead of forced drinks and forced mail fraud
never telling what they did do
wrong it was to think they'ed tell the truth
peek at you uno cards
was still innocent fun mischiefs in the familys group
not what opening my mail thought
suffering kids isn't what I cost
great are the forces that visited me at my mothers house of
then what happened to their greatness
without their problems noticed where  they was
seeking to make them out


Scheme ABBCBDBEFEGBHIJKBBL
Poetic Form
Metre 111111011111100 01111 110110 11101011111 101101 11111 10101 101111011011 011110111 10101111 1111111101 111011 11100110011 11100111 100110111 1101011001111011 11101110 0111010111 101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 706
Words 136
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 566
Words per stanza (avg) 136

About this poem

thinking the worst isn't what I meant

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Written on February 02, 2203

Submitted by xspert on February 02, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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