Analysis of Timely redeem!
Ishtiyaq 1964 (Karari)
Err one may, in innocence,
But none must, in ignorance.
Inadvertent; forgiven is sin,
Intentional; none’s forgiven.
Until sincerest redemption,
No exemption, no expiation.
Ego, What if I? Arrogance,
Lock redemption in defiance.
‘Worldly’ indulge in emption,
‘Death’ offers none an option.
‘Except’ eviction, isolation.
Redeem prior to Resurrection.
To eternally reign supreme,
‘Hereafter,’ timely redeem!
| Scheme | AABC CBAA CCCC DD |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1110100 1110100 01001011 01001010 011010 101011 10111100 10100010 1001010 1101110 01010010 01101010 10100101 0101001 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 451 |
| Words | 80 |
| Sentences | 11 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 14 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 79 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 14 |
About this poem
Often people err in innocence yet are unaware that they are in err. My poem is a timely reminder that it is best to 'Timely Redeem.'
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Written on January 27, 2023
Submitted by ishtiyaq_s on January 27, 2023
Modified on March 16, 2023
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